Does my prologue give enough of an introduction?
Should there be more of a focus on my home as a place itself, or is the focus on my state of mind in the place alright?
Are there any gaps or confusing parts of my story?
What can I add to make my piece stronger?
Are there enough genres?
Should there be more pictures?
Should there be more of a focus on my home as a place itself, or is the focus on my state of mind in the place alright?
Are there any gaps or confusing parts of my story?
What can I add to make my piece stronger?
Are there enough genres?
Should there be more pictures?
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